Can't See You
Yet the dream lives on comforts and distracts For one night of peace, or is it passions unspent penny that takes me where I can't go, can't see you? Reality seeps in and chains my heart down till the...
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I love:For one night of peace,or is it passions unspent pennythat takes me whereI can't go, can't see you? and it just got better.
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Thanks Teagan. I just threw my heart into this one. Once I reread it later I had myself in tears....for crying out loud, I hadn't realized how sad it sounded till I read it out loud....
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Hi Theneva,A cry from the heart I could feel in mine too. Very intense.Next to the ones T mentioned, which are very special indeed, these linger in my mind/eye...Yet the dream lives again replays and...
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Thanks Leny. I changed a word or two to suit what I felt I wanted say with this poem, today. Hope it comes through better now. My feelings are running rather intensely lately. Must be frustration! lol...
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such testament to a longingand will of an author of empathy.Quite an emotional script, Theneva;with sadness i share your losswith gladness I share your glorious gift of words.Jeff
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TY,TY, Jeff. Three keys that unlock thoughts: drunkenness, trustfulness, love.Three candles that illume every darkness: truth, nature, knowledge.Three sparks that kindle love: a face, demeanour, speech.
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Oh, Theneva - this is gorgeous. So sad but so brilliant. I just love it!!
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Thanks, Etain. I had a feeling you'd like it. Three keys that unlock thoughts: drunkenness, trustfulness, love.Three candles that illume every darkness: truth, nature, knowledge.Three sparks that...
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I think you have a new fan in me...beautiful writing, easy to relate to.mairin
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